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Old April 5th, 2009 #21
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Fixed that.. Let me know if you notice any other spelling/grammar mistakes
 
Old April 5th, 2009 #22
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Under Recommended Reading - shouldn't "Who Rules america" have a capital A?

Obama Presidency - incompetant should be incompetent.

In "Cowardice is the white man's strategy" (the cont. on page 6) thru should be through and "Why should I stick my neck out" has no ? after it.

Thru instead of through again in the holocaust picture on the top R of p.8 and he's also double question-marked twice in that piece.
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Excellent work, Varg!

Page 9 would make an excellent flier to distribute, especially if it had contact information like GoVNN.com and PodBlanc.com! Are you still looking for filler on page 11? By the way, if this does become the finished product, can the PDF files become an electronic version of the paper? Where do I sign up and send finances for the physical paper to Rounder?
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Instead of having the cartoon "The Liberal White Complex" on page 11 you should have this on there instead with the GoVNN. com on the bottom:
 
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In my "Obama Presidency", the apostrophes in this sentence need to be put after the esses, not before:

"Here are some damning quotes straight from the camel's - er,
horse's- mouths:"
Page 4, near the bottom.
 
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In Glenn Miller's "Cowardice" piece, "woman" needs to be changed to "women" in paragraphs 4 & 5.
 
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Rounder,

I'm in for at least 200-300 copies.
Whatever I can get out there.
You've sent me newspapers and all kinds of other literature before.
I will be in contact.

The first place I'm going is to all the White peoples' houses right around that fucking civic center where the slope just went off, killing everybody.
I live right here near Binghamton.
I plan on papering that whole area.

Hey White man, how do you like all these insane slopes.
Thanks jews, for letting us live with these sub humans.
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Rounder,

I'm in for at least 200-300 copies.
Whatever I can get out there.
You've sent me newspapers and all kinds of other literature before.
I will be in contact.

The first place I'm going is to all the White peoples' houses right around that fucking civic center where the slope just went off, killing everybody.
I live right here near Binghamton.
I plan on papering that whole area.

Hey White man, how do you like all these insane slopes.
Thanks jews, for letting us live with these sub humans.
Thanks, iceslayer. Just send check, cash, or money order to:

Glenn Miller
PO Box 3861,
Springfield, MO 65808

100 copies. . . $8.00
200 copies. . . $16.00
500 copies. . .$40.00

Printing cost is 6 cents per copy, and shipping cost is about 2 cents per copy (maybe more since postage went up since our latest edition). No salaries. No profits. All for The Cause.

It's good to see VNN'ers checking for spelling and grammarical errors this time.
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In my "Obama Presidency", the apostrophes in this sentence need to be put after the esses, not before:

"Here are some damning quotes straight from the camel's - er,
horse's- mouths:"
Page 4, near the bottom.
so

Here are some damning quotes straight from the camels' - er,
horses'- mouths:

??

( i just want to be sure before I change it)
 
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Instead of having the cartoon "The Liberal White Complex" on page 11 you should have this on there instead with the GoVNN. com on the bottom:
That wouldnt show up well on b&w ink'd paper.

hand drawn cartoons work best.. so i'm going to keep the one we've got
 
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Thanks everyone for searching for the spelling errors. Ive fixed all the ones you guys found. Let me know if there are any more


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Are you still looking for filler on page 11?
Yes i am. Preferably a short article

I prefer text for that small space though because that page is already filled with a bunch of images

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By the way, if this does become the finished product, can the PDF files become an electronic version of the paper?
Well yea the PDF will always be online.. so you can do what you want with that as well

As long as this thing gets distributed.. its up to you how you want to do it

I think having it in newspaper form will be the easiest to read though
 
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so

Here are some damning quotes straight from the camels' - er,
horses'- mouths:

??

( i just want to be sure before I change it)
Looks good to me (but wait for someone else's opinion.)
Camel's mouths refers to the multiple mouths belonging to the singular camel.
Camels' mouths refers to the multiple mouths belonging to the multiple camels.
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I think Alex has said once before.. The best time to distribute would be early sunday morning.. go to White middle class or upper class neighborhoods .. throw it right next to their sunday papers. So when all the White guys who are home from work go out to get their sunday paper.. they'll get a dose of TAA as well

It will also make it harder for some jew to drive around and steal the papers out of peoples lawns like has happened for the other papers
 
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This isn't a typo but constructive criticism

How the Jewish Supremacists Wrecked America.
The line "They have torn our borders open, permitting, indeed cheering, the Third World dregs who will soon replace us as the majority" doesn't read smoothly to me. Permitting and cheering what? I know what you're referring to, but it doesn't seem fluid enough.


Perhaps changing it to "They have torn our borders open, permitting, indeed cheering, *the mass entry of the Third World dregs who will soon replace us as the majority"

or *<word meaning uncountable> influx. I thought of immense or immeasurable influx but I hate alliteration. Something that alludes to the fact it's not known exactly how many illegals and legals have wandered in. D'ja get what I mean?

and White America’s Final Warning
by N.B. Forrest still has competant instead of competent in the first line, top of page 1.

I see you got the capital A in the rec. reading, but you uncapped Rules. It should be Who Rules America.
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The Madoff Affair on page 3 second para. reads "The thinking-man’s antisemite would be baffled what to make out of Madoff Affair." - might sound better to make it "make out of the Madoff Affair".
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At the top of every page, the fancy font title (parallel with the page numbers) reads "The Aryan Alterative" - shouldn't it be Alternative?
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The Madoff Affair on page 3 second para. reads "The thinking-man’s antisemite would be baffled what to make out of Madoff Affair." - might sound better to make it "make out of the Madoff Affair".
Ok I fixed the ones you noted.. and a few others

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Lasher is banned for disrupting an Activism thread after Alex warned him

Varg says bye now
 
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Varg, can I tell Lasher to fuck off and die or will Banny come after me for disrupting? - edit - doesn't matter.



Top of page 6 - Glenn Miller's cowardice piece.
"White men have been liberated from their duty to defend White women. JOG’s laws and jews-media’s “political correctness” say’s so." Say's should be says.
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Top of page 6 - Glenn Miller's cowardice piece.
Same article

"why we fight and finance Jew wars to protect Israel and world Jewery;" should be Jewry unless this is an American spelling??
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